This poem is about a person who is very special to me, who always guides me through my pain. I owe him everything... and I should have believed him all those times.
I tend to give very detailed critique but since this is so personal, I'm afraid to do so. Are you just looking for whether people recognize the emotions and like it in general or are you wanting to know what works and what doesn't so you can work a revision or at least apply feedback to future works? Your love for the person who plays this special role in your life is evident and the drawing is sweet. Send me a note if you'd like more feedback than that. I'd appreciate your looking at my work, Angry Totem Tiki Mandala to offer your critique, as well. I welcome constructive criticism in feedback comments or by note.
aww... this is so sad, and beautiful, and then happy, I've always wished to have someone that would say things like that to me, be happy that you have that, and believe, even if it is a risk to do so