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The downbeat starts the show
And every time we turn a page,
You're louder than the music
For your smile fills the stage.

The melody is playing
And the beauty may befall,
You're closer than the audience
For your face can move the hall.

The song begins right now
And with the other actors gone,
You're brighter than the spotlight
For your eyes keep beaming on.

I never hear the words
Because the figure there is you...
You're stronger than the curtain
For your voice just shines right through.

~M

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My school just finished our production of "The Secret Garden" musical yesterday, I wrote this as a tribute to everyone for doing such an amazing job. :)

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=magicwingsforever Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful job-I love the way you started your poem and how it clearly describes a play. :)
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~thepigang314 Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! That's exactly what I wanted to portray.
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:iconlabyrinther:
Clever :), very nice
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~thepigang314 Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! :)
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Mood: Love ~EmoEliKue Mar 26, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
wow that is strong :) looks like... a person make a wish and make person to change the world...
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~thepigang314 Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! And yeah it took me a while to choose my words on this one :)
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~Kenliano Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sweet!
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~thepigang314 Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! :)
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Mood: Love ~Twinet Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ooooooooooooooooooooooo- This is so pretty! :D
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~thepigang314 Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you :D
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